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Post by Guest on Fri 18 Apr 2008, 9:00 pm

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...................anyone lived in a pretty how town
...................(with up so floating many bells down)
...................spring summer autumn winter
...................he sang his didn't he danced his did

...................Women and men(both little and small)
...................cared for anyone not at all
...................they sowed their isn't they reaped their same
...................sun moon stars rain

...................children guessed(but only a few
...................and down they forgot as up they grew
...................autumn winter spring summer)
...................that noone loved him more by more

...................when by now and tree by leaf
...................she laughed his joy she cried his grief
...................bird by snow and stir by still
...................anyone's any was all to her

...................someones married their everyones
...................laughed their cryings and did their dance
...................(sleep wake hope and then)they
...................said their nevers they slept their dream

...................stars rain sun moon
...................(and only the snow can begin to explain
...................how children are apt to forget to remember
...................with up so floating many bells down)

...................one day anyone died i guess
...................(and noone stooped to kiss his face)
...................busy folk buried them side by side
...................little by little and was by was

...................all by all and deep by deep
...................and more by more they dream their sleep
...................noone and anyone earth by april
...................wish by spirit and if by yes.

...................Women and men(both dong and ding)
...................summer autumn winter spring
...................reaped their sowing and went their came
...................sun moon stars rain

...................E. E. Cummings

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Re: anyone lived in a pretty how town

Post by BC Williams on Fri 06 Jun 2008, 7:22 am

It shouldn't be so easy to read . . . and even harder to understand . . . but I've not figured this out yet:

up so floating many bells down . . .

Then it's just down to down and kiss with kiss the gal with red suspenders!

Lovely emagination, estlin ~ bev

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Post by Guest on Sat 14 Jun 2008, 2:27 pm

Again I think this guy is a space monkey .I don't like his style of writing .I don't like his ethics .I don't like the guy .He would have done better if he never wrote .He gives me an annoying feeling when I read his garbage .
He, he! , now he has got me going .Who made this guy a poet probably the sheep ,If you don't understand it pretend to love it as he is in style just now .Sorry man but yer crap and I don't want to understand you ,as to understand you would make me laugh .What a waste of classical poetry .
Bobby

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Post by BC Williams on Sat 14 Jun 2008, 3:01 pm

awwww, where's your sense of adventure! But, I admit I have not cared deeply myself for his work. He's here because many do find him intriguing. I think this piece is playful, almost reminding me of Seuss:-)

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Post by Guest on Sat 14 Jun 2008, 3:09 pm

He, he, I think he was up there with him when he wrote this .I just can't get my head around him .I find him not as you would say an adventurer but more of a man lost at sea.Sorry Bev, not my cup of tea at all . I had to force myself to read all this and the other one about being in love witha girl on a hunt with her hounds was worse .
Bobby xxxxx

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Post by BC Williams on Sat 14 Jun 2008, 3:17 pm

Hahahaha . . . don't worry, Bobby - plenty of folks think like you do - that his work's just a bunch of nonsense.

I want to expand our list of Notapoets. Who would you like to see added? PM me . . .

Hugs, bev

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Post by Guest on Sat 14 Jun 2008, 3:25 pm

I love all the Classics and can just spend hours reading them .Yes pal more please and more of this guy if nothing better I just might get to understand him ,This was a great Idea having this section . As it is an inspiration and goal to meet .
bobby
P.s. But not this guy , he,he !

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Post by Guest on Fri 18 Jul 2008, 6:09 pm

Huh! he is like toast without the butter ,he,he!
I can do better than this ....right let me just get me wee note book out .....dumb de dumb dum ....... right back to my page and to work Nessie :4444: "What is he up to now?, he, he!".....

Jackoe xxxxxx :i669: :447: :447: :447: :447: :447:

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Post by BC Williams on Fri 18 Jul 2008, 6:57 pm

Careful Jackoe . . .

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